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| Open Poetry #21 |
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Your Eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Your eyes... moist trembling lips... Saying yes, no, maybe. So unsure. Our hearts racing as cheeks flush, nostrils flare and bodies quiver Holding you. The unspoken answer of “the right time, and place.” I love you... Love you enough to wait for your eyes to say yes.... Until then I... will hold you and admire the beauty of you... of your eyes.... As my eyes gently say to you .....I understand... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How sweet Cold hands means a warm heart |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yep, you are definantly a *keeper* Barry...  with a soul like yours? *swoon* enjoyed this!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh!! This is SO romantic Barry! HUGE ole sighs coming out of Canada tonight! ~summer night hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe all the true pleasures of love are secretly reflected in the tears lovers share and I know together your tears you share will always express so much and your love will only grow every day with her! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The eyes have it... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Very romantic, enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
if only.... ~smiling~ at such a sensitive moment M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . you mind if I take notes Magnus?? great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
We all long to look into the eyes of another and find understanding there. I enjoyed the very soft images in this poem. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, loved you sensitive eyeful. The only time I ever looked that deeply into another's eyes I fell asleep - but then he was a hypnotist. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey! How'ld I miss this one? Now, how could any woman not appreciate a man like this? Sensitive and gallant. ThisDiamond |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The eyes are the windows of the soul. paladin |
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