Open Poetry #21 |
Lessons Well Earned |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I play the piano I'm a little off key I may sing sad songs now and then ... ... it's just me being me I stand back to the wall and sometimes I will cry It's just the way you make me feel ... ... no matter how I try I wait to hear the words the sound of love returned It would just make it all complete ... and my lessons well earned Playing the piano with my heart feeling blue helps me find rhythym in my soul ... ... the sound of love for you create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful!!!!!! Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, very romantic write Craig! Enjoyed the read on this summery afternoon. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Man, just impressive over and over again. How do you do it? WONDERFUL!!! MOVING!!! Made me think about my life.... Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Sweet and romantic..made me think =) Great job, keep writing Tai |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig...this is excellent...speaks volumes.. One of your best... |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
I truly loved this. Very romantic! You.....just keep being you. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Craig~ There is nothing better then playing the piano.....I play often.... I adore this....very musical with a little blues.... hugsssss youuuuu.... Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ctowen I used to play my feelings on the piano, but now it is too old (or am I) and I write them instead. I really liked this honest tender poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, I could feel your tears in this write, sweet friend, you have a sensitive loving heart and I wish for joy to always be with you! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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