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Open Poetry #21

Stars Were Candles Lit

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-07-30 02:36 AM

Crickets
Vibrated our song
Last night
Pine tree scents in
The atmosphere of desires
The moon melted our shadows
In our love
Stars blanketed
As if candles lit
Our bodies where on a
Pedestal and responded
In open view
As nature intended
Reflections of our
Sweat glistened
in spent triumph
Lover's knots were tied in
Intertwined passion

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

1 posted 2002-07-30 04:46 AM

Goodness this is beautiful.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-07-30 09:49 AM

Thank You very much......
~~ Connie ~~

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