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The Hierophant's Creation Dance
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The Hierophant's Creation Dance |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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ribbons woven intricate ties of silk-- a worm's parade I bind my hand upon the left lest he point to mine own grave... I bind my foot upon the right to keep her step in intimace oil stains the colors deep-- I light the flames-- I breathe incense. I play the flickers with my hand-- I touch the stones of altar spread. I circle salt widdershins I tuck my intellect in bed. There can be no "me" in me-- a chalice, full, can not be filled. My voice is silence singing still... I feel pulse in wrist of dead. Tandem dance of universe keeping rhythm of the drum. I am cyclone-- tunnel wind-- I become myself, undone. Born within the particles of dust kicked by my feet-- ribbons loosed across the sky as I labor--birthing me... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-29-2002 03:14 PM).] |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
There can be no "me" in me-- a chalice, full, can not be filled. My voice is silence singing still... I feel pulse in wrist of dead. you gave birth to some excellent imagery here...this is a breath taking read, one i shall come back too awesome Sammie ^i^ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For so many reasons, this is wonderful... and I certainly am enjoying your "new" name... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
damn gurl!!!! this packs a powerful punch!! it SOCKS it to ya!! *whew*.. hehe love this line "I become myself, undone." and yet another pome which proves yet again why i call you harpo what's with the blaze thing? you on fire again??? you didn't have to add that! everybody knows yer HOT!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Wonderful write, so many good lines here I can't pick one out.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ribbons woven intricate ties of silk-- a worm's parade I bind my hand upon the left lest he point to mine own grave... I bind my foot upon the right to keep her step in intimace oil stains the colors deep-- I light the flames-- I breathe incense. ============================= Tandem dance of universe keeping rhythm of the drum. I am cyclone-- tunnel wind-- I become myself, undone. Born within the particles of dust kicked by my feet-- ribbons loosed across the sky as I labor--birthing me... Born within the particles of dust kicked by my feet-- ribbons loosed across the sky as I labor--birthing me... =================================== You live up to your name with this one me twin.. set the night on fire baby... I LOVE the imagery in this KA..and the metaphor for YOU. This is one very very cool write me girlie... love when ya candle dance  mothyme |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all most kindly---and Doreen? Remember this? /pip/Forum70/HTML/000162.html *ahem* pssst...we are getting married Thursday...REALLY. THIS TIME FOR REAL. We got the license and everything...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooops....forgot to mention...the name change is in honor of my new last name--which will be "Blaise." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the fires burn. . .  you know that I loved this one. . . for way too many reasons. . . just hope that my own dance is as creative. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Glad to understand the name change sis...was wondering on you...thought you might have just caught fire or somethen... grins... You've drown me in the mystic you Karen...oh I do sooo enjoy this... think my oils would mesh nicely with yourn... love to ya girlie!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
serenity blaze..you sure do rock! *and the name really suits you!* Loved this, I really did, for many reasons. Will be thinking of you Thursday. ~Hugs~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
and  and  Moody Guy who Likes Yr Poems She said burn ... together. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity blaze Amazed...many times by the way you write. Congratulaions and big hugs for Thursday!  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your poetry is so powerful and this one fills the bill - so many images - so many feelings evoked - loved it - love the new name and congrats on the reason for the name change!! Paul |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Terrific again, Karenity. Best wishes and Congratulations. I have a good feelin' about you. Don't know the mister, but figger he must be quite the Saintly Daemon. Something for you and "others" in Open (a gift, sorta). Save me a dance (with the Bridesmaids, too) ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
heh heh heh-- wranx? no bridesmaids...my maid of honor? is our daughter, and the best man? our son. And I still have not agreed to wear shoes.  But I wanted to pop in and thank you all for the generosity--you all amaze me, time after time--I am running out of ways to thank you.  (serenity exits, saving herself for marriage...) - - - |
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