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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-07-23 09:57 PM


No One Said It Would Be Easy
By: Noah Eaton
7/23/02

I knew when I first knew and fell in love with you
I had so much many new responsibilities
Have to accept all the ups and downs
Knowing there's a cost and its never just some Annie Oakley

Through your heart I found a refuge from all this animadversion
Knowing I'm in good hands and I am my own critic
But every time you leave without saying goodbye has me nervous
Just hearing you say hi makes me feel so lovesick

No one said it would be easy
Did anyone believe in it at all
Maybe we're truly meant for each other
Maybe we're supposed to fall

Through your heart I've learned all of loves chrestomathy
Yet I need you or I'll forget much of what I learned
Every time you're busy I can feel the hand of Octobers chill touch me
Standing on an empty gray street with black roses and burning love letters

Every morning when I'm alone I make up fairy tales
I'm holding your hand and we're running in faerie gardens
And i feel your warm hands around me as I drift with you on a white horse
Just your sweet whispers of love give me goosebumps reaching your heavens

No one said it would be easy
Did anyone believe in it at all
Maybe we're truly meant for each other
Maybe we're supposed to fall

I truly believe He makes me feel this sting to help me love you even more
So I can be your perfect lover and have your golden heart soar
Still there's no reason not to ask myself
If I still mean everything to you?

No one said it would be easy
Did anyone believe in it at all
Maybe we're truly meant for each other
Maybe we're supposed to fall

But I can easily say how much I love you
Is it easy for you too?



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-23-2002 09:57 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-23 10:53 PM


Cute.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-07-24 08:11 AM


Noah,
there is much pain in this one.
HuGS
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-07-24 11:35 AM


I have come to find that in life nothing is easy.Nicely done!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-07-24 11:45 AM


Noah,
Good question enjoyed the read.

Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-07-24 01:20 PM


You certainly turned your inside out in this poem...

Don't be afraid Noah!!!  Just dive into it!!!

Love, Light and Happiness!!!

Neeraja

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-07-28 04:50 AM


I hope that I never told anyone that it is easy...but some are easier than others...especially if two share the same derires...hope good things happen for you...James
Samantha G Kennedy
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7 posted 2002-07-28 05:56 AM


ahhhhhh Noah, this a touching piece ~ love to read you, always a pleasure

Sammie

^i^

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-07-28 09:10 PM


Love is never easy, Noah....
My dear sweet young friend....
even when its easy it isn't easy, and its not supposed to be easy because it its too easy then its not real.
I guess the same can be said of life...

I love your poem.
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-07-28 09:14 PM


There is a certain art to missing someone...the welcome. Best of everything Noah. ThisDiamond
Goodknight
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10 posted 2002-07-28 09:21 PM


deep love painfully expressed - ah Noah love has so many complexities and is never easy.  I wish for you the best - this is such a well written poem with oh so much feeling - Paul
Corinne
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11 posted 2002-07-29 11:57 PM


Hello, sweet Noah.

Nope, no one did tell us it would be easy,
but we still cling to the hope that it will be (why, I don't know!)

Cor

Joyce Johnson
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12 posted 2002-07-30 12:14 PM


Glad I came over here and found you Noah.  This is a sweet love poem.  Joyce
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