Open Poetry #21 |
No One Said It Would Be Easy |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
No One Said It Would Be Easy By: Noah Eaton 7/23/02 I knew when I first knew and fell in love with you I had so much many new responsibilities Have to accept all the ups and downs Knowing there's a cost and its never just some Annie Oakley Through your heart I found a refuge from all this animadversion Knowing I'm in good hands and I am my own critic But every time you leave without saying goodbye has me nervous Just hearing you say hi makes me feel so lovesick No one said it would be easy Did anyone believe in it at all Maybe we're truly meant for each other Maybe we're supposed to fall Through your heart I've learned all of loves chrestomathy Yet I need you or I'll forget much of what I learned Every time you're busy I can feel the hand of Octobers chill touch me Standing on an empty gray street with black roses and burning love letters Every morning when I'm alone I make up fairy tales I'm holding your hand and we're running in faerie gardens And i feel your warm hands around me as I drift with you on a white horse Just your sweet whispers of love give me goosebumps reaching your heavens No one said it would be easy Did anyone believe in it at all Maybe we're truly meant for each other Maybe we're supposed to fall I truly believe He makes me feel this sting to help me love you even more So I can be your perfect lover and have your golden heart soar Still there's no reason not to ask myself If I still mean everything to you? No one said it would be easy Did anyone believe in it at all Maybe we're truly meant for each other Maybe we're supposed to fall But I can easily say how much I love you Is it easy for you too? "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-23-2002 09:57 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cute. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, there is much pain in this one. HuGS Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I have come to find that in life nothing is easy.Nicely done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Good question enjoyed the read. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
You certainly turned your inside out in this poem... Don't be afraid Noah!!! Just dive into it!!! Love, Light and Happiness!!! Neeraja |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hope that I never told anyone that it is easy...but some are easier than others...especially if two share the same derires...hope good things happen for you...James |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
ahhhhhh Noah, this a touching piece ~ love to read you, always a pleasure Sammie ^i^ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Love is never easy, Noah.... My dear sweet young friend.... even when its easy it isn't easy, and its not supposed to be easy because it its too easy then its not real. I guess the same can be said of life... I love your poem. ~ chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is a certain art to missing someone...the welcome. Best of everything Noah. ThisDiamond |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
deep love painfully expressed - ah Noah love has so many complexities and is never easy. I wish for you the best - this is such a well written poem with oh so much feeling - Paul |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hello, sweet Noah. Nope, no one did tell us it would be easy, but we still cling to the hope that it will be (why, I don't know!) Cor |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Glad I came over here and found you Noah. This is a sweet love poem. Joyce |
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