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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-07-29 05:15 PM


palm trees are chicken feet
stickin' in the air
on the end of topsoil drumsticks
and synthetic breasts
with putting green aureolas

kokuni strums the slumber hum
of a flamenco sitar
for the martini man
performing three putt mumification
two fingers at a time

and scratching his ear itch
with the writtin' end
of an embassy suites crayola,
will the archaeologists call it poetry
or ear ache tattoos in a thousand years

when they dig him up at the 16th hole


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-29 05:16 PM


very cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-07-29 05:51 PM



Get OFF the golf course and into
the pool...
it's cooler there!

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2002-07-29 06:45 PM


DS

You're too much!!  Hugs!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-07-29 07:11 PM


So that's where you've been!
*smiling at this one D*
~slow hugs on a summer night~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-07-29 08:02 PM




(smiles) You always make such a wonderful archaeological journey of a poem, sweet friend, now take a break and have a nice bowl of strawberries and cream like the golf professionals do! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
6 posted 2002-07-29 11:45 PM


You been smokin' those palm leaves again, my friend? Just kiddin'

a very colorful poem. I like the direction you've been going with your art.

Cor

CSKpoet
Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-07-30 12:32 PM


smiles at all the comments..grins...might be smokin on the golf course ,but you are a clever devil at whatever you write..loved this..
what will you come with next?
surprises...

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
8 posted 2002-07-30 12:44 PM


I'll just be over here cracking up.
whimsy!
damn....
rollinBS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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