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Lost Into You
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Lost Into You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LOST INTO YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Noticed you in the park, sitting under an oak… Embraced in soft breezes, this heart awoke… Reached out my hand, taken gently into yours… Fingers meshed together, silent, feeling contours… Enchanting love known, both wanting to heal… Feelings open for each, nothing to conceal… Once if forever would, stay near to continue… I’d be fond of the depths, to be lost into you… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always get lost in her eyes and see all your dreams come true forever, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a sweet poem and a lovely read - thanks Paul |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love the last two stanzas of this poem. They are SO powwerful!!! Nicely done!!  A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello Bill! It has been a while since I last saw your writes. As always, very lyrical read. Best Regards, ThisDiamond |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful,Bill, that last line topped it off perfectly. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I agree with Sandra, Bill... the last line is a perfect finish to a beautiful poem.  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh...he is back.... |
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Tea Lady Junior Member
since 2002-07-11
Posts 26 |
This is wonderful. The last verse.....the first two lines......fantastic. Wish I'd written that! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling heart ohhh my how beautiful and softly flowing is this exquisite and beautiful poem, it caresses the mind while stirring the senses, truly awesome darling heart. YOU are an amazing writer and this is a jewel of a poem. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly The whole poem is brilliantly put together, the flow exquisite you simply get better and better I love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
always enjoys your read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah poet sir...you do have a way of making me swoon with your written words. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill, You write such wonderfully romantic poems. Juanita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"Id be fond of the depth" wow thats so romantic Bill....your words were missed so good to see you back.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
all i can say is awwwww If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I didn't miss this one...had to go way back though.  Very well worth it, friend! |
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