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She Owes Them Nothing
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She Owes Them Nothing |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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A man who claims to love his wife Never should take another mans side After he stands there cussing her out By her side he should always abide It seems not all men do this with his wife Instead he stays with his drunken friends Making excuses for the things they say Wondering why his wife won't make amends I don't think a wife owes her husbands friends Forgiveness for the things they say or do Just because they might have been so drunk The wife does not have to forgive them too She owes them nothing that I can see So why should you expect that from me By Sue 7-30-02 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (07-31-2002 12:36 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A lot of truth in this one Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Sue, what you've said is so true, I'm pretty sure many can relate! Sometimes I wonder, where does the word "objectivity" go in a company of men? mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSue~ Breaks my heart for you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sue...this is so sad. Well written sweetie. ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Life is like a poker hand. We never know the cards we will be dealt. But you are right you owe them nothing. Good write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl this is so well written it broke my heart. When you write the deep truths that abide in your soul you excel darling heart, Truly exquisite writing I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly Perfect poetic phrases, I love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SmartChick, you owe them nothing, but you can pay them out anyway. Powerful sentiments. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with Kethry. The wife owes them nothing. You expressed your thoughts very well in this poem. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You owe them nothing, Sue... absolutely nothing, unless you can think of something totally and appropriately vengeful. Sorry...I am a troublemaker, but I love you my dear friend and want to see things get better for you.  ~ hopeful hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been noticing, Sue... that the more you write of the truth... the better your poetry becomes.... keep writing... there're a lot of lessons still to be shared... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I agree, I think your poetry continues to get better every time you express your heart, you don't deserve any of this madness and I hope soon you find respect in love thatn you deserve ever so much! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmmm....I agree, maybe it's time to say goodbye...I know I would, and did. |
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