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tired moth t'nite
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tired moth t'nite |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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this is going to hurt like hell... a beast--in flight--it beats my chest from within, in shrug of skin-- fluid parchment's talon-cleft-- oh yes, it's gonna hurt like hell... transformation of the self bat wings turning ~butterfly!~ drossing gold from silver sigh-- I get dressed to meet myself. This is going to hurt like hell. [This message has been edited by serenity (07-27-2002 02:52 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is cool! want to change without the pain? where do I sign up? a pipedream, yeah damn good! um, I would just call it "chrysalis" problably dunno tired too BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
bri? grin...just got an e mail that "got to me" so I'll dedicate this to you as well, for being an admittedly tired moth, an' all! ---  hugs and many "zzz's"  oops...should explain...I needed a title for this, so my need for title was in the title...groan.... [This message has been edited by serenity (07-27-2002 02:57 AM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I believe the title works fighting the beast is most awesome even when we are butterflies... never let that pen go dry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Mirror, mirror on the wall whose the fairest of them all. If it doesn't say you, get another mirror.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi I'm your local mirror salesman. Our mirrors never make a mistake. You can reach me at 1 800 new image. Just ask for your best reflection. Good write Celeste! |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
This poem has now gotten this stuck in my head: "It's creeping in again, I know what I really am. No more pretty, purple, peaceful butterfly." Well, at least Butterfly kicked Ricochet Days out. Though just writing that title is threatening to bring it back... Very expressive, and utterly cool. All in all, good write.written in blood before everything went black |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is going to hurt like hell... a beast--in flight--it beats my chest from within, in shrug of skin-- fluid parchment's talon-cleft-- oh yes, it's gonna hurt like hell... ======================================== ya mean its not supposed to????? yayayaya... and? I'm STILL a tired moth this morn ... but ... I'm smiling cuz of you    mothyme How she loves me, I dont understand |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*picturing the beauty* this gives me yet another glimpse of your beautiful self Karen...(no arguments) and I love the thought of *butterfly* (so does this mean you'll stop attackin my damn clothes???) grins... all my Cali kisses.... Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderful read - thanks Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*ahem* devina happens to have very cool clothes. grin...it's not like I'm undignified, er anything...heh heh.  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I get dressed to meet myself. I believe that we all do this to some extent, Karen...especially as we get older. I love your poem...and also, your new name. ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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