Open Poetry #21 |
A Smile in Moonlight (probably written while possessed by mike :) ) |
Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
If you're wondering what th' hell that there in the subject means... The very second the first line of this poem came into my head, I was thinking "that is so not something I would write; that's Mike's voice!" And the words kept coming... In the same voice. So, somehow, Mikhail, you possessed me at work last night. Maybe you dreamed a poem and it came in through my pen? I d'nah.
written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-27-2002 10:16 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Possessed or not Lori~ I think you've found your softer poetic voice!!! You've put imagery in the moon..and? *that* is my favorite thing to see!!! take care you!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Her fragile mouth moves in words that cannot find voice, floating by on an endless diamond stream. ======================= He influences your pen in very cool ways this is delicate and lovely... has a mystical, ethereal essence to it. Way cool imagery. Well done poetess Lori How she loves me, I dont understand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lori, What JM said I can never top her. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is different for you going with devina on this explore this beautiful softer side for a while BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
enjoyed your poem very much - thanks for the great read - Paul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I wish I could write like that, baby. God I love you. *long hug* Immer. She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It does sound like a dream, Lori She smiles in accents and coloured hues of moonlight's rising. How very delicate. ~ chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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