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Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

0 posted 2002-07-26 10:50 PM

I asked the guards about the voices
They said they were just the other nuts
I’ve never met any of them before
So why are they all talking about me?

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2002-07-26 11:40 PM

In realizing life as it is portrayed...a little sanity is found in solitary ponderings. Alot to think about in this one. Enjoyed.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-07-27 01:21 AM

I always figured they were just jealous. I love this little exercise in saying a whole bunch with very few, but extremely well-chosen, words.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2002-07-31 04:33 PM

and this one packs a punch!! Yeah, I have to go back and read it a couple of more times, because the words keep evolving. Great write!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-07-31 04:35 PM

This one is intense. It says so much in so few words.

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

5 posted 2002-07-31 05:22 PM

Reminds me of the lines of an old R&R song.
"Paranoia stikes deep.
Into your mind it will creep".

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (07-31-2002 07:40 PM).]

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

6 posted 2002-07-31 05:42 PM

nobody is ever truly alone... that voice in your head always gets in the way

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

7 posted 2002-07-31 11:50 PM

It's ALL ABOUT YOU, isn't it. Have you never read the Peanut's Strip with Charlie brown thinking the girls are talking about him, and so he gets all depressed. I mean come on! Good piece though... even if it shows your egocentric side (not that you have one).

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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