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Waking Dream
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Waking Dream |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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Waking Dream Come Share a vision I dream during the day With me there is bread to break -sunrise to wake to Hold the dawn in your hand; sunsets in twilight years Truth as an infant Pure and magnificent, with a scent like a new home Feed my soul with sustenance of caring love Always I shall cherish every moment Forever I shall keep you safe Extend your hand and live our Waking Dream (C) 2002 Picasso Lyrics |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very nicely done - enjoyed this dream and well written poem - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautiful invitation, sweet friend, I just know your love will always be happy to walk hand in hand with you in the sunshine! (big hugggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff "Truth as an infant Pure and magnificent, with a scent like a new home" Tender and loving, your words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
FANTASTIC!! Now...you just know I love this Jeff! Wonderful feelings within this piece. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
~~my hand extended~~ You know I would love to break bread with you, always.  This is beautifully breathtaking my love, thank you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Enjoyed both poems. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this poem! Neeraja |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I truly enjoyed your daydream, Jeff.  ~ hugs from the MunksterLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jeff, this is so soft and such a dedication/offering. Worthy of presenting to most anyone..and accepted easily.... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Thankx so much, y'all. You sure do know how to make a Midwestern boy feel welcome. Wish i had more time tonight....sigh...to give you thanks properly. Might have DSL here in the next few hours! Cooooool, huh? Keep peace in your heart jeff |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is wonderful Jeff~ it has such a feeling of peace to it....thank you for sharing this, I really needed to read a passage such as this tonight.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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