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The Gulf of Mexico |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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Clear deep blue changes into emerald green The waves caress the snow white beach I walk along the shore alone an unseen The sea breaze carrys a lone gull's screech Is he lonly too and looking for his mate? I think I know just how he feels today It seems we are cursed by the same fate I walk alone till someone comes my way paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (07-26-2002 11:21 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Bob, this piece sounds as sad as mine did last night. Would love to see those white sandy beaches, down there where you are... A sense of longing in this write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I could feel the loneliness...this reminded me of the long poetic story, The Wake of Magellan by Savatage. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paladin Just got back myself, good write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think I know just how he feels today.... this piece aches of alone. So very well written... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
paladin I think I have walked on that beach before...with the same feeling. Enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, this is indeed sad and I believe somehow every creature on the earth shares the same emotions as us and together we will get through them all! (sigh) I am a huge fan of your words, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Thanks for the replie Noah.Gosh(blush) I never had a fan before.Paladin has left the building.LOL paladin |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Paladin, This felt so lonely so I hope someone comes along soon. Juanita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the breaks in this, paladin, for you allow the shift of imagery to jerk mental pictures in and out of the shadowbox... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Emotions of alone but so beautifully penned! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I could feel this with my soul, Bob... the true pain of being alone...*sob* Aren't you glad you have us...all of your friends here at Piptalk, now you'll never be alone because we won't leave you alone.  ~ hugs of blue sadness with the sounds of seagulls in the backgroundLyra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You've portrayed a vivid picture of loneliness here so well...great write, paladin! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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