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Broken and Stolen |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Candle light stars of bright Enchanted hour turns sour Golden bands wondering hands Decietful lies someone cries Unborn child divorce filed Life in the womb death consumes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Stevie darling boy this is brilliantly written and incredibly sad, you darling heart have so much talent. Superb writing darling heart utterly utterly superb. You know I love this don’t you, I’m always impressed by your ability and this is stunning as usual As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Marsha You really know how to make a man feel good.If you know what I mean.lol |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Stevie, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone, especially the youth, who are afflicted by these kind of tears in their lives and I pray that that enchanted hour can turn around again for them all! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stevie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am glad Mushy made you feel good, cause this poem doesn't feel good at all... Hope all is well... |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie, Very strong emotions! Love you! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sodpossom Life is sometimes so sad.... I have seen it often that way, but also glad. You have expressed the sad. Peace. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awww so sad but nicely done If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
SP, I like the way you did this. The short, sharp lines reinforce the emotion in the message. Very well done. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Wow....a powerful piece!! this has awesome flow to it too...a great write Brava!! Sammie ^i^ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A sad, beautiful and powerful write, Stevie...  ~ hugs of applauseLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
deceitful lies make me cry inside...powerful statement here Stevie  |
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