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Chuck This Tiara!
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Chuck This Tiara! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I liked the way it looked on me. I liked the way it felt. I loved the sparkle, over head. I loved the way my sweet knave knelt. I enjoyed, the carpet--red-- before me was a path of ease. I adored the praises said-- I ignored the serf in bleed. My carriage, led by finest team-- horses of great pedigree. All of world in bow to me in awe of all my finery. I had oils in annoint-- ladies stitched my petit point pillows sewn to rest my head-- I might just as well be dead. A ring of gold, is heavy, weighed, compared to freedom's flying hair, riding bareback in the wind jumping hedge as if a dare. There is nothing to compare-- to taking jump, to find ground there... May the wind rip gold to shreds-- tell them that I rose from dead. [This message has been edited by serenity (07-27-2002 12:34 AM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't know why but I envision thoughts that keep bringing me back to Julia Roberts and "Runaway Bride". No laughing.......you could be her for all I know.......or her ... you. Or it could just be that I ate something that wasn't on the menu tonight so for thought of after dinner mints......I shall ponder before return. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've never had the tiara, but I'd take the freedom over it any day. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grinning at Mark...oops!  FELT THOSE COLD FEET, DIDJA? HEH HEHthank you lovie!  and yes, Pilgram? (I am trying NOT to do a John Wayne thing here) you are right...but sometimes the way out of a mess? IS THROUGH.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
May I be coloured in tatoo of autograph?  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-27-2002 01:51 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
... wha? Bu... bu... the tiara looked so nice with the gold macabre!  have you notice that many of your poems lately speak of fighting through something? hmmm... there's a morale in there somewhere. *winkies* It's tough, but not undoable... you are a FORCE, lady... keep 'em coming... If I look confused it's because I'm thinking. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Break the chains and feel the wind of freedom blow through your hair..... Go girl! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
From the hither to the yon and back to hither... smiling here, Serene One... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I’ve noticed a few cold feet themes in your poems lately. Sometimes the tiara can be heavy to wear, sometimes it’s as light as air. All depends on the giver and the givee. A ring of gold, is heavy, weighed, compared to freedom's flying hair, riding bareback in the wind jumping hedge as if a dare. Personally, I prefer the winds of freedom…having done the band of gold and findng it very tight round my finger…but that’s just me. You can never win or lose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen...I love this...and your want of a tiara! You are way cool girlie! Enjoyed!! ~Hugs~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm behind you all the way! Well you know what I mean......support! Perhaps I shall catch something for a keepsake.....But heck I'd still be wishin you were in it........just me back here! Like Johnathan Edwards sang in Carolina..... "This old wagon ain't no carriage with her six golden horses in hand, but we can listen....oh we can listen.... to Carolina in the sand..." Fly girl fly! [This message has been edited by ethome (07-27-2002 09:03 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*warming your cold tootsies* yah, I say chuck it for the skinnydip..but? that's just me... less'n your up for a trip out here!!!??? Love the idea you've set forth here...got my queeny mind to thinkin... take care my purdy sis!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I had oils in annoint-- ladies stitched my petit point pillows sewn to rest my head-- I might just as well be dead. A ring of gold, is heavy, weighed, compared to freedom's flying hair, riding bareback in the wind jumping hedge as if a dare. There is nothing to compare-- to taking jump, to find ground there... May the wind rip gold to shreds-- tell them that I rose from dead. ==================================== So youre saying the fairy tales aint real and the prince really is a frog???? No happily ever after? huh..who knew? what will we poets write about then?  You DO know how cool this one is, right? and? ya look good barefoot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, You throw a long lasso. Excellent write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jan? I'm sitting here and looking at my feet--and it just occurred to me that I put a lot of money and effort into my feet--just looking down? I count NINE accessories. (not to mention the loveliest shade of rose polish on the nails...) anyhow? Let's count 'em: 1. (1) left barefoot sandal (shoes without soles..  )2. (1) right barefoot sandal (shoes without soles.. OH. Those are prolly inter-changeable. heh. heh?3. (1) sterling moons and stars anklet on the left leg. 4. (1) gold chained anklet with amethysts--right ankle. 5. (1) enamel inlay anklet, all caught in up in #4,,,(I'm gonna need help with that one) 6. (1)Sterling toe ring, in shape of cobra. 7. (1) baby ring, a multi-gold rose, on my second to baby toe on the right foot 8. (1) pentacle on my left big toe, with connecting "slave chain" to smaller toe ring 9. tattoo.  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So you're really getting married...huh! Now why am I having a hard time believing this, Karen ??????  ~ chipmunk loves ya anywayLyra |
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