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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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I hate to say it But I am lonesome The one I love Is gone Eventually all the lonliness disappears But you never forget What you had Which makes me sad They always say, "Things get better in time." I think they are wrong That is just my opinion I am so lonesome I feel like I could die But one day I won't be lonesome anymore Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
The last two lines are right, because one day I'll be there. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sad but well written write. It's always tough being lonely. I think lonely owns me. So it seems. I understand your pain. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
sad but enjoyed  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh sweetie you do never forget, but in time, the pain eases and you can move on. And bigger and better things are waiting just around the corner. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heard something worth repeating, I think... pain is like fertilizer; it stinks, but from it we grow.... and you're going to make a glorious rose.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A place we all go sometimes. Even with many around us. I really like what Sunshine said. She is right. Chin up Ms. Lovely. Sincerely, Reg |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - the loneliness does disappear with time, but one never can forget. Great write of feelings. The best to you... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I hope this is not actually related to you and just a fictional thought but if it is, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) I know with a golden heart like yours true love is always bound to sing to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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