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Heat Of Passion
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Heat Of Passion |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Heat Of Passion The heat of passion fills my heart as sun rays warm my flesh Unerringly our course we chart where souls can take refresh We wished upon the stars at night while gazing at the moon From first glance two hearts taking flight showing we weren’t immune In strong arms I take nightly rest sharing love from within The magic is real, I attest our future will begin The sparkle in your eyes ignites shivers of heat inside They make me sigh from delights your gentle touch applied A love no longer fantasy each waking hour now filled Bringing with it ecstasy that leaves me quite fulfilled Karen Torbiak© 2002 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime A delight to read, loved it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! Does this mean what I think? I'm SO happy to see you here and happy!! ~Hugs~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm asking the same question as Enchantress.....I hope it's true and there's a great love there for you....I really enjoyed the upbeat swing of this poem! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ So good to see the gentle beauty of your thoughts~ 'Unerringly our course we chart where souls can take refresh' Wonderfully said~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You write these feelings so very well! A fulfilling read. I love it! Hooray for Karen! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things are happening...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, A truly beautiful poem...which you do so very well....filled with hope and so much more... I wish you every thing, that each dream comes true and that you have all that you have ever wished for... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, I insist on an announcement posting details, if this is a true story  Love the poem, and the happiness it signifies. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (06-14-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very nice *s written so sweetly. hugs M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It sounds like someone's in love I love your poem about being in love.  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nicely done Startime, what a way to make an announcement! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I really liked being invited to listen and hear the joys of passion woven by your words - thanks |
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