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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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In deepest abyss my mainspring cries open passing the envelope of season into bridal weeps and tears These seldom invitations to speak my mind climb from o’er the walls of silence rattling my cage and telling me secrets that I keep They sprawl back with affection steeping lore of my wile, while I am slowly rocking wild notions, more wild than rumor itself Am I not the same as you, this flesh and yet I pillar myself behind long streets that lane way into the darkness Hoping that it is okay to not want the attention of the master For there are others waiting and I am content Spent still yet, I am merely desiring Just this detailed rewinding notion A wishing sort of water ripple flicker that I see you in goldest rise and you smile.. that warm, fresh bread morning smile And I run, slow but hurry run to an embrace so absorbing that I know you from first force of life to slow sigh of sudden remembrance All those many days that broke upon my wrongs in fighting mourn and willful cast were worth waking for this moment My eyes would drape closed then And I would feel as silk and purple on your arm, your waistcoat the sun I catch my breath as a million sunsets roll into one. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
All those many days that broke upon my wrongs in fighting mourn and willful cast were worth waking for this moment Regina~ your writing springs from a well that is so full and inviting. I so enjoy reading the delicate trickle and constant consistancy of your words. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rwood - your writings always exquisite, always with thoughts as you place them on this blue screen... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Regina It seems that sometimes I could have written your thought, for they feel so familiar, yet I could never color them with the silk and lace that perfumes your poetry. This is so lovely! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
My eyes would drape closed then And I would feel as silk and purple on your arm, your waistcoat the sun I catch my breath as a million sunsets roll into one. Oh what can I say, here...Reg... This is just awesome! A million sunsets roll into one...Wow!  ~ silken purple hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"My eyes would drape closed then And I would feel as silk and purple on your arm, your waistcoat the sun I catch my breath as a million sunsets roll into one."   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, ooohhhhhh...I could just imagine what a million sunsets as one would look like, this is breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) I love the colors of this, sweet friend, this is dazzling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina you wear dreams of wax water and borrow warm to smooth them I hear your skin whisper love songs the sun is a lucky god today |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Absolutely exquisite!... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to quote a phrase. . . "be still my foolish heart. . . " wonderful Reg. . . touching the heart again. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In deepest abyss my mainspring cries open passing the envelope of season into bridal weeps and tears These seldom invitations to speak my mind ================================ while I am slowly rocking wild notions, more wild than rumor itself ================================= Hoping that it is okay to not want the attention of the master For there are others waiting and I am content Spent still yet, I am merely desiring ===================================== And I run, slow but hurry run to an embrace so absorbing that I know you from first force of life to slow sigh of sudden remembrance All those many days that broke upon my wrongs in fighting mourn and willful cast were worth waking for this moment ============================== Such a deep introspective piece... perhaps such a personal write that some parts wont be seen in its intended light..but one of those writes where each reader can take something personal away with them, each will see some of themselves in the words. Love the hints of inner rhyme and the phrasing you chose to express this lovely reflective piece. As always...so well done Poetess Reg mothyme |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So...okay.... I came I read I shake my head and wish I had the words for a proper reply.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, A deep introspective piece and it sings your song. Lovely |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Reg, you write with such depth...that I feel like I need a shovel to get out of this and reply properly.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Blues: Your words are like soft splendor to me. Thanks for being so kind. Bill: I am grateful for you and these blue pages. Hugs poet. Martie: I know exactly what you mean. Very good vibes from you..from your work..very familiar. Thanks for allowing me the chance. Lyra: Anything you say is special and always appreciated..Big hugs. Noah: Thanks for being here. You brighten my hope! Love and hugs. Dark: I love that. I love how you see things. How you write what you see so easily. So grateful you are a poet. Nancy: Thanks sweet magic lady..hugs! Sven: You quote I blush..works for me! Thank you so much. Janet: Thanks for that word "introspective" you are so very near to the heart of the subject and I appreciate the look there. I do have a different look on spiritual aspects of life..I do hope it is positive feeling. Thanks again. Sunshine: If all there were was a . or just your li'l icon..I'd feel blessed. You are so great. Seymour: there's that word again. I like that word..and I'm so glad you listened today..It means so much. Magnus: Dear poet..you only need a pen..and a spoon..and a big bowl of icecream..with sprinkles of spirit love. Sincerely, Reg |
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