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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-24 11:00 PM


There's a place that I know of
Where lovers come to rendezvous
I would like to share this paradise
And go there now with you

You'll see a beach lined with palm trees
As far as the eye can see
So won't you please take my hand
And walk along the sand with me

We'll walk the sandy shore
Just as the sun begins to set
I'll promise a night of love and romance
That you never will forget

As the sun melts over the ocean
We'll etch our names in a heart
Your passionate kiss being a signal
That our sweet loving will soon start

In a hammock we will sway
As our love will now begin
The warm wind brushing over us
Caressing our salty skin

This day is now a memory
As the moon comes into view
I now tenderly kiss your lips
While slowly making love to you

We'll search for constellations
As the stars encrust the sky
And as our hearts sway together
We'll let our cares drift on by

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-24 11:00 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2002-07-24 11:26 PM


A wonderful place indeed. A great write.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2002-07-24 11:43 PM


This is a beautiful romantic poem.
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