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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-23 07:00 PM

In Pillowed Hold

I don't think it's selfish
to want to be with you,
wander through my days and nights
rooting a seed or two.

Plantings from my mind to yours
building, growing strong.
But I can only hold a pillow,
hold it for just so long.

I would never ask from you
without giving in return.
A fragile heart to share its love
to understand its yearn.

I'm reaching out to touch your world
for you to meet halfway.
Seen through eyes of hazel, mine
accepting all you say.

For knowing true, the meaning of
the silence heard, your song.
But I can only hold a pillow,
only hold it...just so long.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-23-2002 07:25 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-07-23 07:09 PM

Maureen darling heart sister and collector of moon’s shimmer this is extraordinarily good, you do know this flows like liquid light don’t you? It has the words entwined in a weave of unsurpassed beauty do I love it? You know I do. Truly exquisite writing. The softness in this poem is a delight to read I simply love it utterly utterly love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2002-07-23 07:23 PM

Plant a seed or two into your pillow, some dreams may grow and with care they may even come true. *s

Pretty poem, my friend.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-07-23 07:24 PM

Just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-07-24 09:13 AM

Maureen,
I love the repetition in this. Sorry we got d/c earlier.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

5 posted 2002-07-24 11:32 AM

Very beautiful!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2002-07-24 11:45 AM

Most beautifully expressed Maureen
Hope

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-07-24 09:26 PM

nakdthoughts,

Your dreams will come true. Wait and see...

BC

powerofthysword
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

8 posted 2002-07-24 09:56 PM

Excellent poem, and your signature is a very beautiful saying too.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-07-25 02:53 AM

It helps to turn it over and let the cotton cool your cheeks. Ok I'm going to love my pillow now. Say goodnight Lor~

Enjoyed your poem Maur~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

10 posted 2002-07-25 03:04 AM

Exquisite emotions ..beautiful thoughts in poem

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

11 posted 2002-07-25 03:11 AM

and we brake free in a strange way with words to court us through our days.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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