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TwoHeartsOnePen
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since 2002-06-07
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state of determination

0 posted 2002-07-23 12:48 PM


Here's another page for our book, my Love, wishing it to be.

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these are the memories my heart will always hold
eyes of softest brown reflected in moon's soft gaze
a smile, nervous and unsure
hidden behind lips waiting to speak of love
and to give passion's first kiss

hands finding places for themselves
as though they had been there all the time
a press of bodies beneath a Gulf Coast moon
tenderly whispering in unspoken phrases to come
tears that flowed freely from eyes reflected in themselves
colors shining back to each as a mirror
brown to brown, meeting as a set
and becoming lost, never wanting to return again

words spoken before, but now the first time heard
by untethered ears that had waited to hear them now
and to rejoice that they could be heard
a touch of hands that never really wanted to let go
but needed to so that they could find their place
so that love could finally be known and shared
and that memories could be made
for both hearts to hold

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Yes, there are two of us, I am the He of this pair of hearts joined in words.

And yes, it will not always be that we will reveal ourselves to you as such, but our story is to be one for the ages, one of the great Literary romances, and we would like you to share in it.



Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

[This message has been edited by TwoHeartsOnePen (07-23-2002 12:52 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-23 12:51 PM


I like this one a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
2 posted 2002-07-23 01:02 PM


This is one of the most beautiful lovepoems I ever read!!!

What a lines... the love behind those words!!!  Thank you for the love you weaved in this poem!!!

Neeraja

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3 posted 2002-10-03 03:33 PM


*breathless*
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