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Open Poetry #21

Rorschach's Test

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-07-22 11:26 PM

I am squib
of too intense
bleeding black blood
on parchment
pressured scribe
who makes not sense
seraphim without compense
words in pour concealed by flood--
a blot of thought that bleeds black blood...

What was cry of innocence,
becomes a shadow charcoaled dark.
What was seriph in detail--
weeps the test of Rorschach's lark.

I am just like you--in bleed.
I'm whatever you might see...
see the forest through the trees?--
chop the chain of pain--release...

[This message has been edited by serenity (07-22-2002 11:30 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-22 11:27 PM

I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-07-22 11:29 PM

Richly "inked"
Richly "liked"

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-07-22 11:31 PM

serenity

You are much more than black...you are colored in my mind with tints and shades of mostly bright and shining true.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-07-22 11:35 PM

oh my...I did it again...posted before it was done. (Yep, I'm the type that pops the toaster to see how the toast is doing...lol)

thanks good poet people...and I'll try to inhibit my urge to edit.

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