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My Oceanic Sun Choka
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My Oceanic Sun Choka |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 Mists of sea foam spray In a never ending kiss Total devotion Calm sea reflecting the sun A mirror image Symbol of love unbroken Ignoring the view I only have eyes for you My oceanic Sun Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (07-21-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cheryl, being a haiku addict, i must say you are a lovely addition to these blue pages..i can't wait to read more of your haiku/senryus... liked your offerings, especially the third..."my oceanic sun" can be interpreted as both literal and metaphorically...way cool  [This message has been edited by faterider (07-21-2002 11:51 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love chokas so so much and such love fills your words, I love the ocean waves and your gorgeous words flow with beauty of the sea! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
thanks so much!! I am glad you both enjoyed this choka...a favorite haiku form for me.. Poetry is: |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cheryl, bumping this up with a haiku of my own..this should generate more replies..  deceptive sun we laid an ambush~ determined to watch it set It hid behind clouds! |
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