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MomentzBefore
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since 2002-07-22
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0 posted 2002-07-22 07:26 PM


Ran out of things to say
Can't think
Can't remember
What I was suppose to do
Once I was here
Was I suppose to still love you?
To hold you forever?
To sit here and hold on
To the memories
Memories that are all forgotten
Was I suppose to do that?
Shedding tearz all day long
Was that what you wanted me to do?


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-07-22 07:37 PM


welcome *s...I shed quite a few myself...
hugsssss
M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-22 07:37 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions!
Very well done first post.
I'm sure you will enjoy it here...
Relax, read, and sign the posts of others as well..
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-07-22 08:01 PM


Welcome!
Very good premier. Look forward to reading you. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-07-22 08:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! This is such a wonderfully sad debut, sweet friend, you have come to the right place for here we will share all our feelings with you! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, mya you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, ooohhhhhh...please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2002-07-22 08:45 PM


very well written poetry - welcome to Passions - look forward to many more from you - I liked this - Paul
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2002-07-22 08:49 PM


Welcome! I love the little 'bite' to this poem. I hope you enjoy all the wonderful things we have here. I look forward to reading more from you.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2002-07-22 10:45 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I hope you find yourself a poetic home in which you will be able to find expression, beauty, and comfort.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


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