Open Poetry #21 |
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Was I? |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Ran out of things to say Can't think Can't remember What I was suppose to do Once I was here Was I suppose to still love you? To hold you forever? To sit here and hold on To the memories Memories that are all forgotten Was I suppose to do that? Shedding tearz all day long Was that what you wanted me to do? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
welcome *s...I shed quite a few myself... hugsssss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello and welcome to Passions! Very well done first post. I'm sure you will enjoy it here... Relax, read, and sign the posts of others as well.. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome! Very good premier. Look forward to reading you. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! This is such a wonderfully sad debut, sweet friend, you have come to the right place for here we will share all our feelings with you! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, mya you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, ooohhhhhh...please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very well written poetry - welcome to Passions - look forward to many more from you - I liked this - Paul |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! I love the little 'bite' to this poem. I hope you enjoy all the wonderful things we have here. I look forward to reading more from you. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you find yourself a poetic home in which you will be able to find expression, beauty, and comfort. Karilea |
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