Open Poetry #21 |
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Let the Day Begin! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
The moonlight glows soft on my skin Yet I say, let the day begin Let that deep warmth of summer sun Bring my warm dreams of night undone Letting the breeze so soft and low Taking from me this night time glow Let now the sun in gentle warm Give me my meaning, give me form Those dreams lie soft upon my brow And I will say who claims me now The knight of night has left me cold In dreams of lust left half untold The sun gleams bright against my skin And I say, let the day begin Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done gal....(for some of us it means: Let's get ready to rumble!)..... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
my tummy's rumbling...does that count? Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved heart sister this is utterly utterly wonderful without doubt one of your best. I love this I really do as always Marsha ![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem!!! What a start of the day!!! Neeraja |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved it ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
do you mind if I just borrow this??? great job Keth. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Kethry, this is just beautiful! ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is delightful such happy sunshine fills your words, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
More beautiful words from you Lynne. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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