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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-21 12:29 PM



Primary Colors

when I dream
of you
I dream
in color
not some light pastels
but bold vivid shades
splashed upon
naked canvas
brushed in silken strokes
painted in eyelashes
and whispers
unafraid to touch
unused pigment to sheet
with finger painted sighs


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-07-21 12:33 PM


Helen,
Dream on...and on...and on... Just keep writing about it. Thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ethome
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2 posted 2002-07-21 12:44 PM


"bold vivid shades
splashed upon
naked canvas
brushed in silken strokes
painted in eyelashes
and whispers
unafraid to touch
unused pigment to sheet
with finger painted sighs"

UuMM!   Very nice!

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3 posted 2002-07-21 07:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, mya his colors always paint your heart with smiles, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-07-22 06:24 PM


WOW!~ You didn't half-step on this one!! Double-time all the way!!

SWEEEEET!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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