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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-07-22 05:44 AM


vous êtes mon salutation d'aube
you are my dawn greeting
you are the orange bosom of sky
when she leans to my eye pools
and makes the warm light there

you are the perfume of rose breath
when wind children carry baskets
in their cellophane hands
and whisper laughter fans
to make crimson sides of songs

vous êtes mes rêves dans la nuit
you are my desire in night
you are the lavender skin horizon
when she embraces purple man mountains
and fits her indigo to dark valleys

you are the damp scent of mist
when pale eucalyptus is wet skinned
and dances her tall limbs quiet
when her shadows are fingers twined
and her eyes are moon splinters

you wake me with dream sleep then

©Dark


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1 posted 2002-07-22 06:54 AM



The imagery man is back....

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-07-22 06:56 AM


DarkStranger~
I have awakened to the scent of vanilla-words ...

You are remarkable ... and this is stunning~
Morning *hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-07-22 07:05 AM


ms sunshine, thanks sweet lady for the warm
greeting, hugs good morning
marge, thanks to you ms, slow smiles and vanilla scented java of thoughts


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-07-22 08:42 AM


my how your work reverberates throughout, erupting in shivers...mmmm. mmmm.

It's like an involuntary reaction!

Great to read you again, DS!

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-07-22 08:43 AM


Beautiful shades and scents
here, Dark.
So pleased to see you
here, once more.
~slow morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-07-22 09:03 AM


serene 1, thanks ms, your replies are enjoyable to wear

ms enchantress, good morning and thanks to you for the sigh dance

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7 posted 2002-07-22 10:04 AM





Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Martie
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8 posted 2002-07-22 12:20 PM


Good Morning, DS

You sweeten my coffee with your images..that last stanza was like seeing it through your eyes.  I'm very glad to see you!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-07-22 01:02 PM


Lauren

some of them kissy face thingies right back at you...thanks babe
Ms Martie, slow hugs to you neighbor lady, thank you for reading and waving from your side of the sun

devina
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10 posted 2002-07-22 02:12 PM


You are a whisper of defeat man...

*shivers*...even when you try not to evoke them...

(no fair)

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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11 posted 2002-07-22 02:57 PM




(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always flow like velvet across these pages and shine with such true love! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2002-07-22 03:12 PM


ms devina..

you are a gift of replies
and I enjoy your little dot people
thanks babe

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13 posted 2002-07-22 11:27 PM


you are the damp scent of mist
when pale eucalyptus is wet skinned
and dances her tall limbs quiet
when her shadows are fingers twined
and her eyes are moon splinters

you wake me with dream sleep then


Je prie la nuit drape le jour dans pour toujours des notes de soupir.

Beautiful D.

Sincerely,
Reg

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14 posted 2002-07-22 11:30 PM


Lovely stuff, D.

Cor

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2002-07-23 06:28 AM


Regina..

be there in mornings
let us cancle the nights
and forget all days

thanks babe

cor, thanks to you lady friend, glad to see you (big hugs)

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