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haiku sado |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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be of quiet song make the way of tea peaceful know serenity as host of dragons walk to the sunken well ro is in winter know the furo when sun is behind bamboo and kakejiku chanoyu tranquill sunken fire knows kama koicha steeps still budoka absorbed shakuhachi and koto odori of blind be of quiet song ©Dark |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Interesting Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
be of quiet song make the way of tea peaceful know serenity ~*~ bird song knows our way steep the simmer flavoring sip the soul combined |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a beau -T- full image Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Are you sayin I should drink TEA instead of coffee??? ~sigh~ if I can have this kind of peace...me thinks to try anything~~~  grins... now I'm thinkin.... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS To be of quiet song...such a lovely thought..the rest teases the tongue and I would like a translation...please. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, this is wonderful, your vocabulary and imagery always stun me, this is excellent, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
loner, thanks to you for your interest sunshine bless you ms for your addition it is so fitting kethry, humble thanks for your softness and enclosed please find a hug devina, slow hand hugs lady of smiles, thanks you ms martie.....it is a warrior sitting in a tea ceremony listening to the dance of harp and flute....the other words like kakejika, koicha, kama etc are articles of the ceremony it is intended as a peaceful place of contimplation ro=sunken fire in winter furo=fire container in summer kakejika= a hanging scroll chanoyu=hot water of tea kama=hot water kettle budoka=warrior shakuhachi=flute koto=harp odari=dance thanks babe for the read and the waves noah, thanks sir for the continued reviews. You bless me sir. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-22-2002 06:20 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, DS The words are beautiful as is the ceremony..appreciate you giving me the translations. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~ I enjoyed this so much! I do believe I would love to sit in on one of these ceremonies. Do they serve Chai Tea? *~*~* Tender young tea leaves, Green butterflies perched on twigs Plucked early in life. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I did not understand everything until I read the reviews...as should be, they were rave. There was a feeling for me of calmness. Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
be of quiet song This is how you made me feel. A quiet drifting song steeped in lore and peaceful intrigue. Sincerely, Reg |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dark~ the sun behind bamboo, I love that image....wonderful voice...   Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This is perfection--You've added a whole new dimension to my enjoyment of haiku. What does sado mean?  Shenachie |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I really admired this piece and learned some good thing from you as well. ..thank you very much! big smiles to you Poetry is: |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms enchantress..you are a sweet treat to my setting ms, thanks to you this diamond, most humble thanks to you for the read and reply regina, tea ceremony is an exercise of one's oneness with time and self, if you get out this way sometime..we must attend, thank you doka Lauren, slow hugs to you lady friend, you bless me often bridget, thanks to you and a budoka smile of appreciation CSK, arrigoto, you are too kind |
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