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The Waiting Room
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The Waiting Room |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Usually at ends of tight corridors away from direct view secluded and hushed environment blokes wait in line until past their prime for close encounters some hardcore in and out behind closed doors stopped at traffic lights some miss the go ahead signal others don't know when to stop. Faucets turn on behind closed doors bodies align thenselves on all fours usually at the end of corridors air filtered microscopic spores turn the taps and wait trap the next with fresh bate welcomed convenient rate waiting room without a towel presents stark truths, invites scowls away from public view... people cruise about a room, where they sweep with eye brooms. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I'll give myself some credit for this..it begins another series on different rooms  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-21-2002 07:52 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Martin, there are indeed so many different rooms and corridors and to further complicate things some go slow but some fail to signal and so we face congestion sometimes! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, I love your perception on everything, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is interesting. I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thankyou Noah and loner for picking this up |
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