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Street Poet
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0 posted 2002-07-20 04:24 PM


Living in a world full of pain I begin to daydream about my mental schemes to be happy

Unhappy is the word that decribes me now as I frown because I see a girl that I wanna be down with but she ain't tryin to hear it

Walking with a shattered spirit I look to the sky and ask why am I so unhappy

My world full of pain has caused me to shy away from things that have to do with me tryin to better myself

Meanwhile my internal health slowly decomposes as struggle to find happiness

On the flesh Iam smiling but inside I am dying with a small chance of reviving whats left of a human soul

I am always going to feel this way until I grow old or I find happiness that reshape a spirit with a new mold

So until then I'll still be the cold street poet who flows about life and writes deep poems with words sharp enough to cut you with a knife.

Oh yeah, Have a nice life



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-07-20 04:49 PM


definitely a strong expression of pain here...
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Street Poet
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2 posted 2002-07-21 11:35 PM


uppin
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