Open Poetry #21 |
the watchman |
woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Inset eyes deep. Alone they scan the winter glass. Broken panes resist a bit of wind and breath still frosts the last. Quiet vigil. Watch the night. slide into the day and if there ever was a time were to rest and sleep give way. No pocket full of dreams is left. the wage has bought it's man. Solo on the tarmac, the lonely solid stands. Wait up for the evil. Watch out for the dark. Reminisce for times forgotten When life still held a spark. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This had that "oomph" at the end that I look for, and strive to write...if I keep sighing, I shall hyperventilate. sigh (make me stop?) |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
hey this is really good |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This really suits my mood tonight. Thank you. |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Inset eyes deep. Alone they scan..." Loved this; so vivid ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
I can not ever seem to get over the amazing feeling I get when you guys read this stuff. It seems to inspire me to scribble a little more. You all are such fine writers I am humbled by your gifts of consideration. I can't tell you how it turns a rough day smooth. thanx one and all. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is soooooo beautifully fagile, sweet friend, this indeed sparks with a nostalgic hope, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wait up for the evil. Watch out for the dark. Reminisce for times forgotten When life still held a spark. Excellent write, Wootic ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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