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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-07-20 11:07 PM



Florida Bound

Every day that passes brings it near
And soon September will appear
Then off to Florida we’ll both go
Where fun and games will surely flow
There’s no chance that we’ll be bored by this
Not while we feel the poet’s kiss
Look if you will at the comic view
Of me on the plane changing hue

I’ll be sitting there praying like mad
That the take off won’t be too bad
And then I’ll mumble some prayers for me
Begging the Lord for my safety
The food that is served will make me ill
Then I’ll take yet another pill
A prayer and a novena or two
As I fly through that sky of blue

Krissy’s hand will be crushed under mine
As she says mum it will be fine
I’ll chew her fingernails to the quick
And end up being very sick
If the plane lands and I’m in one piece
Then the fear that grips me will cease
I know I’ll have to return one day
But not for ages anyway

Watch out the poets will all be there
With love’s laughter and dreams to share
Keth and Tita will cook a nice lamb
While I go for a juicy ham
Poets reading their poems galore
My friends what fun we have in store
Surprises, pressies a lot of love
And friendship HIS gift from above

Marsha




Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

[This message has been edited by Marsha (07-21-2002 10:41 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-20 11:11 PM


Awesome poetry

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-20 11:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this sounds like so much fun, sweet friend, I can tell how excited you are and I hope you have the most wonderful time down there! (kiss on cheek) I wish I could be part of that but I live so far away and have college to begin! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-21 07:16 AM



You will all have so much fun!  
Hug the poets for me, and widen the circle a little more...

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2002-07-21 09:51 PM


I see you like flying as well as I do
But it wil be worth it.
Fun poem.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-07-21 10:34 PM


MarshaLovie~
Bill and I both enjoyed talking with you this evening~
NOW ... I think if I worked REALLY hard I could manage to 'Bev' this one to the top until September !!!
Ya' think ?

I CAN'T WAIT !!!!
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

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Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-07-21 10:40 PM


Marsha, your description of flying is so very vivid...I can just picture you sitting on that plane biting Krissy's nails...poor Krissy
or mayabe you will fly here without a plane and just use your own angel wings.
~ angel hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-07-21 10:44 PM


So they will come from everywhere
To visit Florida's wonder..
Titia from the Netherlands
Kethry from Down Under,
Marsha from the British Isle
Krissy from there, too,
Nanciness down from Cape Cod,
Other poets, too.

What will lie in store for all
As the days progress?
Poetry and friendships made
That would be my guess.
Hopefully the days will be
Nice and calm and sunny.
I want to meet my foreign friends
'Cause they all talk so funny!!

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2002-07-22 06:31 AM


It sounds like it will be a wonderful gathering Marsha!  You've captured the nervous excitement beautifully in this piece!  What a treat for so many from so far to get together. You just hop on that plane and don't you worry about a thing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-07-22 09:41 AM


I agree with Balladeer
so tally ho, let's give a cheer
Florida, get ready go
all the poets are on show
we'll save our cash to have the money
I'll talk Oz, who says it's funny?
you raised the level of my cheer
with your write and Balladeer's
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



BloomingRose
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10 posted 2002-07-22 09:51 AM


Sounds like you hate flying as much as I do! With a prayer or two you'll be just fine.
Destination Florida, can't be beat!
I live in Florida so I am a bit partial to the palm trees and beaches.

Deb

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2002-07-22 05:41 PM



Hi you sweet sis,

Here's my answer: /pip/Forum70/HTML/002551.html

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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12 posted 2002-07-24 12:52 PM


ROFLMAO @ you biting KRISSY's nails to the quick... don't want to ruin your own manicure, right? LOL

This is delightful, Marsha... *S*

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-07-24 09:47 PM


Marsha,

The day is coming closer. I hope that I can be there to visit all...

BC

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