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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2002-07-16 10:31 AM


Come last,  the blue belt
with white pearls,
and tease the laughter bell
before ringing...

open the empty soft box,
and learn the folds
of the clear glass tight.

a feather lays in my eyes and  moves with every wind blown,

and in my arms
is the teather of lessons learned.

amd the sanction of my frothy pearls, is bent down and kissing your loyal toes,

as if the sun only shined for the reflection of nails.

Strong,,,,,,
you say

and weak you go, across my rusty bridge. hammered

and wine red.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2002 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2002-07-16 10:39 AM



Amelia.  Where HAVE you been?  
Welcome home, and thank you for THIS!

GOlDsparklESS
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2 posted 2002-07-16 11:00 AM


awesome
Martie
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3 posted 2002-07-16 11:36 AM


Good to see you again cause I love the way you write!
Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-07-16 11:43 AM


I enjoyed this poetry thoroughly - thanks Paul
1slick_lady
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5 posted 2002-07-16 12:21 PM


i do so love the way you write and always look foward to every post...helen
wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2002-07-16 12:23 PM


redheart you put the red in my soul
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-07-16 12:30 PM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
It is just wonderful to see you, my friend~

'a feather lays in my eyes and  moves with every wind blown,

and in my arms
is the teather of lessons learned'


The way you express your thoughts is so refreshing~
Please don't stay away so long~
*HUgs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-07-16 12:36 PM


and in my arms
is the teather of lessons learned.

lovely poetry here...I hope to see more.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2002-07-16 01:00 PM




I intend to save every one. You always leave too soon.

you are gorgeous.

Enchantress
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10 posted 2002-07-16 02:04 PM


Amelia!  Where have you been??!!
Oh please don't run off again..
This is wonderful!!
More...please?
~Hugs~

Sven
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11 posted 2002-07-16 04:29 PM


it's good to see that I'm not the only one that enjoys your work. . . you have much to say. . . and I'm right here. . . listening. . .

thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-07-16 04:33 PM


Like this...James
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13 posted 2002-07-16 05:53 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh Amelia, we have all missed you so so much, sweet friend, your wonderful words are a delight to read and I hope now your heart flows with the smooth crystal wine of smiles! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amelia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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14 posted 2002-07-16 05:54 PM


Cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

devina
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15 posted 2002-07-16 06:38 PM


This is amazing!!! Have missed your work around here lady!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Elizabeth Cor
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Over the river and through the woods
16 posted 2002-07-17 02:32 AM


sigh.

the moon is out. you are the perfect flavor to mix it with.

Larry C
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17 posted 2002-07-17 02:42 AM


Amelia,
This is so totally cool!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

cherrypoptart
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state of wordthiness
18 posted 2002-07-17 03:15 AM


exceptionally cool!
Sudhir Iyer
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19 posted 2002-07-17 05:53 AM


a classically cool write...

regards,
sudhir

redheart angrybraids
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20 posted 2002-07-21 11:38 PM


decaflame-thank you
gouisparkiess-thank you
martie- thank you
thank you paul
thank you helen
wayoutwalt-you redden my soul for saying that
thank you
marge- thank you kindly my dear friend, youare so lovely.
madame-thank you kindly i will go read your words soon, i have little time these busy days.

serenity-you rock my world woman, if only we could have a glass of wine together, we would be a sight for sore eyes. love ya lady you are saved in my library as well.


enchantress- thank you so, i need to read your words as well, thank you

sven thank you i dig that their are people who find it in these letters.

james- thank you

mistle toe- thank you my dear lady it always feels good to hear that you are enjoyed.


loner- thankyou

devina-thank you my friend.

cor, mmmm, thank you so sweet, i hear ya

larry- thank you


cherry thank you


sudhir thank you



redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
21 posted 2002-07-21 11:39 PM


sorry my message wasnt' responding, and i ended up with three copy of the above, love to you all.

[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (07-22-2002 02:34 AM).]

redheart angrybraids
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honolulu, hawaii
22 posted 2002-07-21 11:40 PM


decaflame-thank you
gouisparkiess-thank you
martie- thank you
thank you paul
thank you helen
wayoutwalt-you redden my soul for saying that
thank you
marge- thank you kindly my dear friend, youare so lovely.
madame-thank you kindly i will go read your words soon, i have little time these busy days.

serenity-you rock my world woman, if only we could have a glass of wine together, we would be a sight for sore eyes. love ya lady you are saved in my library as well.


enchantress- thank you so, i need to read your words as well, thank you

sven thank you i dig that their are people who find it in these letters.

james- thank you

mistle toe- thank you my dear lady it always feels good to hear that you are enjoyed.


loner- thankyou

devina-thank you my friend.

cor, mmmm, thank you so sweet, i hear ya

larry- thank you


cherry thank you


sudhir thank you


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


redheart angrybraids
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
23 posted 2002-07-21 11:42 PM


decaflame-thank you
gouisparkiess-thank you
martie- thank you
thank you paul
thank you helen
wayoutwalt-you redden my soul for saying that
thank you
marge- thank you kindly my dear friend, youare so lovely.
madame-thank you kindly i will go read your words soon, i have little time these busy days.

serenity-you rock my world woman, if only we could have a glass of wine together, we would be a sight for sore eyes. love ya lady you are saved in my library as well.


enchantress- thank you so, i need to read your words as well, thank you

sven thank you i dig that their are people who find it in these letters.

james- thank you

mistle toe- thank you my dear lady it always feels good to hear that you are enjoyed.


loner- thankyou

devina-thank you my friend.

cor, mmmm, thank you so sweet, i hear ya

larry- thank you


cherry thank you


sudhir thank you


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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