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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-07-20 01:57 PM


Pillow Talk
By: Noah Eaton
7/20/02

In mornings when I feel sad and lonely
I like to lay on my pillow and stare to the side of me
Imagining my Joanna there staring into my eyes
Caressing her face as I kiss her forehead tenderly
I could of sworn she really says she loves me
But I can never be too sure
Only to realize I've been stricken again by the cupid girl
Poisoned with fantasies and philters
Holding a silhouette of a love in my arms so pure...

In the afternoons I dream I'm by the ocean
Holding my Joanna close to my heart
And feel the water and the sand creep between our toes
Feeling my heart melt to hers like a quasar
We share an ice cream cone and watch the seagulls fly
I'm rolling in the sand dunes kissing her lips
We pirouette in the Chinook Winds and watch the heavens blur
But I get winded down and can't get my second wind
Hearing her whispers like a conch against my ear
With the tears and blood of a love so pure...

And when I daydream
I find my Joanna in the day
But eventually she disappears and turns away
So the reality doesn't feel so enchanting
And when I wake
Mr. Bluebird sings to me in the sunshine
Tears fall from my eyes but I'm alright
But it's just pillow talk I've been talking again

In evenings my love looks just like Eos
She grants me immortality
But I realize it's just a fantasy
So she can't yet give perpetual youth to me
I feel her eyelashes kiss my skin
As I watch the light of her saffron cloak unfurl
But soon the dawn draws near
And I don't feel her rosy fingers caressing my face
I'm just Endymion only visiting my love in my dreams so pure...

And when I daydream
I find my Joanna in the day
But eventually she disappears and turns away
So the reality doesn't feel so enchanting
And when I wake
Mr. Bluebird sings to me in the sunshine
Tears fall from my eyes but I'malright
But it's just pillow talk I've been talking again

If I could
I would make all your dreams come true
And I would
I would give you everything if you still thought the same for me as I do for you
If I could
I would make all your dreams come true
And I would
I would give you everything if you still thought the same for me as I do for you
If I could
I would make all your dreams come true
And I would
I would give you everything if you still thought the same for me as I do for you


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-20-2002 02:23 PM).]

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Charisma
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1 posted 2002-07-20 02:00 PM


Noah what a lovesong you painted here...so pure and full of love straigth from your heart.

((hugs)))
Charisma

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2 posted 2002-07-20 02:10 PM


A very beautiful poem of unrequieted love.
Thank you

Pegasus

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3 posted 2002-07-20 03:31 PM


Noah
Just a suggestion. Go To Florida
You are truly love sick. HA HA
Enjoyed the trip into your heart.  Paul

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4 posted 2002-07-20 04:56 PM


Ah sweetie....such a beautiful romantic write for your Joanna.
Love...Very well expressed.
~Hugs to my sidekick~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-07-20 04:59 PM


I like Paul's suggestion...find out once and for all...*s

M

ethome
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6 posted 2002-07-20 05:23 PM


Dreams of deep emotion!  Exceptional writing Noah.
the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-07-20 05:24 PM


This is beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-07-20 10:34 PM


Oh Noah, you've got to figure out a way to get Ms. Joanne by your side. This was just a knock out poem.
Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-07-20 11:17 PM


"Each night I ask the stars up above.
Why must I be a teenager in love."
Hope good things happen for you Noah...James

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