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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-19 03:14 AM





Last night, I found bliss tucked inside your embrace.
I found one thousand dreams dancing in your paradise eyes.
In the traces of your touch, I found music.
Your kiss leaving me too breathless,
I found my match

And even after your were gone,
I found memories of your lyrical voice
Whispering secrets in my ear.
Discovering you...the beauty of your spirit
Cognizant of your Truth . . .
Paradise unveiled………..

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards,

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2002-07-19 09:44 AM


Now this is one night that soon won't be forgotten and I wasn't even there.   Beautiful depiction of a night we all should be seeking.  The piece read romance divine throughout.
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-19 10:27 AM


How romantic and yet sad at the same time.

Cold hands means a warm heart

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
3 posted 2002-07-19 07:45 PM



i want you to know
it seems like there's a feeling in me
i'll never let go
is it real or am i dreaming?
time takes me away
it feels like there's a rhythm in me
night is changing to day
the music's making me say

show me the way
i'm lost inside your melody
you show me
eternity



reminds of this song...


[This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (07-20-2002 02:01 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-07-19 07:50 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful heart shinbes with true paradise here, may you always soak up the sun of eternity with true love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-07-20 10:59 PM


Who wouldn't want to find their paradise...James
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