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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-20 01:46 PM



My Dream

In a cage of dreams I toss and turn
hanging on to my favorite pillow
with each roll
a hand across my brow shields my eyes
but in each window the inquisitive moon finds me
and tries to enter my dream
lest I wake
and find myself alone


BloomingRose





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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-07-20 01:50 PM


BloomingRose~
Delicately lovely~

'inquisitive moon'

IMMEDIATE inspiration ...
and I will get around to using it~
Thank you sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2002-07-20 02:00 PM




(smiles) Oh Debra, this is soooooo sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now love graces your heart and fills you with delight! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-20 02:19 PM



In short, simple strokes the imagery is replete...
Thank you...

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-07-21 10:00 PM


Bump-deedy-bump !

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