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Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2002-07-20 01:03 AM



I write to you now
in a rush!
To tell of a fright,
the room we call teen
poetry,
is becoming a dim light!
The youth of this great
family,
is dwindling more and more!
I ask you now to help them,
go and post there some more!
The replies aren't doing so hot,
no one will relay..
the zeros are showing up a lot.
So please don't delay,
Post and reply
don't let it fade away,
This can't be their final goodbye!
For tomorrows poets are the
teens of today!

(hey everyone it has come to my attention
that the teen poetry room isn't doing to good
so if you could spare some extra encouragement
that way i am sure they would appreciate it!)

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer K.G. - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-07-20 01:08 AM


Good poem and a GREAT suggestion! I'll keep this on top here if I can.
Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
2 posted 2002-07-20 01:09 AM


Thanks for the help!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-07-20 01:36 AM


BUMPITY BUMP

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-07-20 07:17 AM



Visit the teens
who share our scene
of rhythm, and blues,
and the art
of daily woo...

visit the teens,
they write their stand,
build their dreams,
clasp their hand...


Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
5 posted 2002-07-20 09:38 AM


You got it sunshine!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
6 posted 2002-07-20 03:32 PM


bumping this..

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2002-07-20 04:49 PM


Let's move this up....
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-07-20 06:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Jennifer, this is a wonderful message, I'm so happy you brought this up, I am a teen and I'm sorry that I have done nothing to help support that baord, I will try and find some time to support that forum too very soon! (sigh) I am keeping this up for more to behold, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
9 posted 2002-07-20 11:38 PM


Oh thanks Noah,
I am not doing my part nearly enough
as well.
You are such a sweetie, thanks!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

the reign of chaos
New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 6

10 posted 2002-07-20 11:58 PM


hey babe, so true we must help! ...though cant say i can do much good...lol i dont exactly spit out great poems at will..but i will try!!! and noah is very correct, for you have an extremely beutiful heart! i love you!

       Love,
            Your Boy!

idrift2u
Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60
MD., USA
11 posted 2002-07-21 12:16 PM


OR, let things take their natural course...


Thanks

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