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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-07-19 10:50 AM

Sunsets Golden Glow

So peaceful and dreamy
Upon a soft tranquil night
Golden sunset hovering
Red sky burning bright

Hearts beat in harmony
Under palm trees we lay
Reflecting in the glows
On sunsets golden bay

Gazing glow of the sea
A red shimmering shine
Romance fills the night
Body pressed to mine

Felt the water so warm
Neath the sunset above
Red passionate blazing
Basked in night of love

Hope©2002

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-19 10:52 AM

I like this a lot. it was beautiful imagery.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-19 11:00 AM

That's the sort of basking I could live with. You painted this so well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2002-07-19 12:30 PM

Thank you loner , this was written for a challenge on another board , having to write from a picture of a picturesque sunset
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2002-07-19 12:32 PM

Thanks Kethry for your kind reply , yes I love gazing at sunsets and living near the beach watching the sun descend the ocean
does help
Hope

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2002-07-19 03:15 PM

This is far romantic to only have been seen by two so up we go. Beautiful images are set within your words and the precise manner in which you present them lends to one very sweet read.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-07-19 03:50 PM

love these sunsets, and you captured the feeling within so well....fabulous write!!

Charisma

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2002-07-19 04:15 PM

and a wonderful sunset I see as I close my eyes after reading this powerful poem. Many colors and beautiful scenes - thanks Paul

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-07-19 08:41 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, sunsets and sunrises are always so gorgeous and make me smile no matter what color they are! (kiss on cheek) This is splendid, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2002-07-19 10:24 PM

Hope..This is so very romantic and nice.
The beauty of a sunset can cast a magic spell
on lovers like nothing else.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

10 posted 2002-07-20 08:52 AM

What a lovely romantic portrait you paint!
Simply beautiful.

Deb

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

11 posted 2002-07-21 02:10 AM

'Hearts beat in harmony
Under palm trees we lay
Reflecting in the glows
On sunsets golden bay'

These are such soft images, Hope...beautiful write!

sp