My Attempt To Write A Paradelle

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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-19 11:36 PM

New Forms Of Poetry

To attempt each form of poetry
To attempt each form of poetry
I will try to write at least once
I will try to write at least once
Of each form I will attempt to
To write at least once of poetry

Even though it may be hard
Even though it may be hard
I will still try to write
I will still try to write
Though it may be hard
Even still I will try to write

No fear do I have of trying
No fear do I have of trying
To learn new forms of poetry
To learn new forms of poetry
Of new poetry forms do I have
No fear of trying to learn

Trying to write each form
Of poetry I have no fear
Be it hard I still try new forms
Even though of poetry will I
Attempt to write at least once
May try to do of will to learn

By Sue 7-8-02

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

1 posted 2002-07-20 12:07 PM

Lovly.You are cordialy invited to write a senyru.

paladin

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-20 12:08 PM

Cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-20 12:20 PM

Its wonderful to watch your poetry evolve, Sue...
You are truly becoming an excellent poet...right before my very eyes.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2002-07-20 07:38 AM

Sue,
i believe i applauded you on your enthusiasm and for this "oh, i can so relate to this!" paradelle..here's a bump for you to show my appreciation again...

p/s: i'm extorting my muse to give me ideas for my second paradelle..

keep writing!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-20 02:50 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Sue, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I truly believe this is a paradelle and I love it a lot! YAY!!! (kiss on cheek) You are an accomplished poet and a loving friend, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-07-22 10:25 PM

Sue darling girl, your writing is always superb Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful, I love it utterly, your writing is always filled with such grace. Truly beautiful writing

And to write one of these wretched paradelles doo dos is simply magnificent.

Wonderful writing simply wonderful. Poetic hugs and written smiles.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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