Open Poetry #21 |
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Men Are...Women Are -Inspired by Music Maker's quote |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
Men are from Mars or so they say Because they walk paths in logic's way Women from Venus or so it seems Because of emotional tears and their dreams Men are the doers they share the fire Of Mars surroundings, it lifts them higher In multitasking they're dry as dust But give them one problem they'll solve it or bust Women have feelings in many-planed hue Just like on Venus there's much to get through They work on all levels it's part of their charms Could wield men's emotions without any arms Men travel slowly on paths that are long And quite convoluted, they never are wrong The women are right too and have the last word They wear funny shoes and buy hats absurd Women are mothers and nurturers true They manage the day and mange men too They squeal at a spider, yet ferocious are they? When it comes to their offspring they'll fight and they'll prey Men have the work ethic for something inside They'll earn a good living and do it with pride Their home is a haven from all the world's woes But they like their mates and it oftentimes shows Men are from Mars or so it's been said Women from Venus to walk in love's tread But I have a thought to bring to its birth Let's deal with each other, we both come from earth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
![]() Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (07-19-2002 10:25 PM).] |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul’s song and writer of the moons magic, as always your way with words is outstanding. Never is there a pause in the flow of each line, each word placed in this dance of wordy delight with perfect precision. Again darling heart I’m spellbound by your magic. Beautiful weave of words darling heart, truly magnificent. If you continue to shine so, I shall be forced, against my normal reticence, to find something really magnificent to say, or write a poem for you, and you know how much I hate to do that. Either that or it will be my duty, no matter how distasteful that is to keep you busy with a little duel! Mmmmm ‘tis a good thing I adore you darling girl, or you’d be hanging from the yardarm by now. You know I s’pose that this is okay don’t you? Did I not tell you one day I would write that, I think it’s called the throw away line You only write so well because you can darling heart, and I can’t. And how quick was that? I would have been in bed but……… well you know, and no I haven’t bought anything else honestly. (Oh except the bracelets, it should have been one but it wasn’t, but it’s not twenty-five, so that’s a good thing) ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Great advice, Keth! Cor |
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