it's a song, it's a poem, i dont' know what it is

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Open Poetry #21

it's a song, it's a poem, i dont' know what it is

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

0 posted 2002-07-19 08:44 PM

i don't know
really where i'm goin
and i don't see
really where i am

it's all an illusion
as life just passes by
i've never known just how
high i can fly

i can't see
your heart or mine
and i can't hear
the voice inside my soul

my life has
just been so irritating
and i can't live
any longer like this

it's all an illusion
as life just passes by
i've never known just how
high i can fly

i don't know
if anybody really cares
my life has
just been such trash

i don't see
how i can live this way
and i can't breathe
in the dust

it's all an illusion
as life just passes by
i've never known just how
high i can fly

pain is all i know
and so i scream
my life is just illusions
it seems

i can't live any longer
when life just is such hell
so tell me why i'm here God
if there's anything to tell

it's all an illusion
as life just passes by
i've never known just how
high i can fly

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-19 08:48 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Abby, this is such a sad but wonderful song, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now or soon you will find all the bliss your heart desires for you are so deserving of it and it will happen! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abby, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-19 08:51 PM

"i've never known just how
high i can fly"

I don't know how high I can fly either.
Maybe it's better not to know, or maybe you have to test yourself.
Beautiful poem, and good luck with learning to fly!!!!

(I'm sure somone else will reply!)

-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2002-07-19 08:52 PM

damn!! such angst!!

it's a song alright!!

nice job!! i dig it!

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