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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for you, my Joanna, I love you and miss you with all my heart!  ) Mariachi Tiara Co-Titled "This I Promise You" By: Noah Eaton 7/18/02 I sit here in my bed Thinking of you Wondering if You miss me too I cry to myself Waiting to talk to you again I wish I could be in your heart Know where you've been If I could walk on the stars And kiss your forehead before you go to sleep I would run down the stairway to heaven And sweep you off your feet If I possessed the moon I can make all your dreams instantly come true But if I had you right now, my love I'll give you my heart, this I promise you If I had you If I had you now... I guess I have to accept These days when I'm all alone Because though I feel sad sometimes I know my love for you always grows No calculator can sum it up The day when you're finally in my arms And you watch the sapphire tears fall from my blue eyes Under your emerald stars If I could walk on the stars And kiss your forehead before you go to sleep I would run down the stairway to heaven And sweep you off your feet If I possessed the moon I can make all your dreams instantly come true But if I had you right now, my love I'll give you my heart, this I promise you If I had you If I had you now... You make me smile as fast as tulips bloom You make me warm as a sea of blankets These strange currencies I feel in your dreams Always invest in my heart and make it sated I will wrap your heart in daffodils and satin And crown you with this mariachi tiara So every night I fall asleep I hear you breathing and playing by ear And are beside me in spirit singing pillow talk in samba If I could walk on the stars And kiss your forehead before you go to sleep I would run down the stairway to heaven And sweep you off your feet If I possessed the moon I can make all your dreams instantly come true But if I had you right now, my love I'll give you my heart, this I promise you If I had you If I had you now... This I promise you "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-19-2002 12:10 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is so sweet and beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautiful, Noah... You have such a big loving heart, and Joanna is very lucky. ~ hugs from my heartLyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah this is so special and these lines are just magnificent. Your Joanna is one very lucky girl. ...'If I could walk on the stars And kiss your forehead before you go to sleep I would run down the stairway to heaven And sweep you off your feet...' Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is one heck of a promise, but one that speaks volumes of your love for her. Very sweet indeed. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Noah you are so sweet and so full of love. Always a joy to read your happiness through your words. May love always shine your way  (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your words decribe a love so big Noah and they do it so well - warmth exudes from the power of your love - Paul |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know Noah. . . well, that's just it. . . you know. . . beatiful my friend. . . just beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful write Noah! This part... "If I could walk on the stars And kiss your forehead before you go to sleep I would run down the stairway to heaven And sweep you off your feet If I possessed the moon I can make all your dreams instantly come true But if I had you right now, my love I'll give you my heart, this I promise you If I had you If I had you now..." Has some songwriting material in it. Very well done all the way through!! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah, This was so beautiful! Juanita |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
hey, love this lots! SS |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
She sure does inspire you, Noah. I hope she is back soon. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely Noah..... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah The love you hold dearly for Joanna is shown in each and every thing you write. May both your lives be filled with the love and happiness you deserve. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Incredible focus of thought and attention for one so dear to you, Noah. And congratulations on your 14,000 posting. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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