Open Poetry #21 |
The Trash in My Heart |
mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
The Trash in My Heart An existence of bad remains Lingers on as stark memories For though in a trash I place I have not really emptied it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ack! Get rid of it! Empty it, and call the exterminators. Can't be having that "stuff" lay around! Not healthy! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Empty the trash and you will feel better ... eigher that or get someone else to empty it for you ! . Great poem . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
good one..I am emptying the trash daily. trying to catch up...but it won't be much longer and then all will be gone..ahhh waiting for the freshness of new. M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's trash day...take that stuff out!!! You wanna tell 'em about the mmmmmm sound or should I? |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
i know what u mean.even when we think we've moved on i.e emptied the trash,we really arent that sure cos somehow its still lingering there.keep up the good work! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sometimes, it is so hard to get rid of bad memories. Just when you think they are gone, they pop right back up again. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If you recycle it and make something useful of it, then it no longer sits as trash. Nice little verse with alot of STUFF in it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
mycafe, I understand the echoes of trash, the only way to empty completely is to keep refilling with new things. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Marie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always rid of what makes you sad and always fill your heart with pretty gardens and blessings of flowers! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiul heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
don't we all need a deleted files place where we put stuff and then periodically we empty it and it is mostly gone - thanks for the powerful poem with so much to ponder - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Egad! Empty the trash! Get rid of it....quickly. ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Excellent write, Marie... but into the recycling bin with the trash in your heart. Maybe it will be someone else's treasure. ~ hugs from the heart Lyra |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marie, indeed! while we may move on, it doesn't mean that the void doesn't tag along...something that i'm sure most of us can relate to... life is too short for unhappiness though..so smile |
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