Open Poetry #21 |
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Without A Single Light... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands ![]() |
I wrote this poem a few years ago... I knew this period would pass... (and it did) but that time I just didn't know how or when... Without A Single Light Who turned off the light When I need it oh so bad Who installed on me this darkness That slowly makes me mad Why do I have to travel Without a single light And no one there to help me To fight this scary fight How am I suppose to find My way through all this mess While this black around me Lead me in distress Can anybody tell me What I have to do To leave the dark behind me And find a safe way through... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes, my world seems real dark. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I've known this feeling also Neerja, and you've captured it very well ... much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, before when I was a boy I was depressed all the time and felt it would dwell over my entire life but now I've been proven wrong with you and all my wonderful friends and my Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Neeraja. I think many of us have been in those dark places, but somehow, somewhere there's always a light to crawl to. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
It is so much fun... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!! Thank you so much!!! ![]() Neeraja |
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