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| Open Poetry #21 |
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One More Night... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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For Linda... who broke up with her friend... but needed one more night... before she could let him go... Stay with me until the morning just for one more night keep me in your arms hold me very tight… Shut the door of truth I can’t face it now not before someone can explain me how… Tell me that you love me please don’t ask me why and let us both forget it will be a lie… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah...how we attempt to use the shadows to hide our pain, always hoping that tomorrow's light won't shine so bright... well done, Neeraja...very well done, indeed... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your friend Linda for I know how hard it must feel to let go of someone you love so much! (sad sigh) I send her my deepest sympathies sweet friend, I know though with all my heart she will find the greatest happiness for she is so deserving of it just like you are, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very well written poem and very emotionsl subject - your poem misses none of the power of this situation - Paul |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
The first days are so difficult, give it lots of time, like forever. Lovely write. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thank you sweet people for your support!  Neeraja |
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