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A Fly On The Wall
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A Fly On The Wall |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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I’d like to be a fly on the wall but if I could choose looks I’d prefer to be a pretty butterfly the thing is… no one notices a fly on the wall and just once I’d like to see and hear it all no more tittle-tattle behind closed doors! if I were a pretty butterfly on the wall I’d be seen and someone would take my wings if I were a butterfly with no wings I'd end up a fly designed by a swatter! and I’d never learn a thing BloomingRose |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this. It was very interesting Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Emily would have liked this one. . . excellent. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Debra, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this, your words always bear so much perspective, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, too late, your picture shows you to be a butterfly. Isn't a butterfly with no wings a caterpillar who still has her wings to look forward to? I think perhaps your writing has given you wings. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
more great poetry with thoughts to ponder - loved this one too - Paul |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
loner~ Thanks Just the rambling of one who wishes to be a spy of sorts...just kidding. Sven~ Thank you. I'm glad. Noah~ Always thanks my friend Vas~ hmmmm in this case with no wings the butterfly would have been mistaken for a fly, and thus become one. A smashed one that is. ugh Paul~ Thank you kind sir |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very intriguing thoughts! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so thought provoking, Deb... If you were just a fly on the wall and no one noticed you, you could do plenty of eavesdropping... I guess thats one advantage that flies have over butterflies... but all in all, I would rather be a butterfly, because flies spread disease and butterflies are symbols of eternal life... So I guess that butterflies are really the good guys.  ~ butterfly hugsLyra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
mcafe~ Thanks madame~ So true. Flies are disgusting. For sure, I'd really rather be a beautiful butterfly. If of course I HAD to choose. |
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