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bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

0 posted 2002-07-18 04:01 PM

Disturbances at midnight
fall outside my swollen dream
claws caressing
gently fondling
stimulate my
waking queen

Eyes that glow,a panthers fire
need so little light to see
feline graceful
pleasures passion
softly purring
quietly

I love her feral nature
with its predatory stance
I'm hard impressed
to tame her
with my rigid
sharpened lance

I enter holy temples
sacred places of her kind
mingle juices
from my kingdom
with her bestial
tantric whine

Forbidden Gods now whisper
Dionysus calls her name
in starry skys
the angels watch
unblemished
without shame.

[This message has been edited by bags123 (07-19-2002 03:46 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-18 04:51 PM

Cold hands means a warm heart

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-07-19 01:18 PM

phew*... hot steamy passionate stuff here; fantastic, great poem ... I love the way that you talk of wild untamed physical passion and spiritual love as one . Brilliant .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-07-19 02:13 PM

This is some impressive write...
your cadence and rhyme are superb...this was a treat to read aloud...and your employ of vocabulary, metaphor and imagery are excellent.
very cool write here...I'll have to keep my eyes open for more of your work.
Well done poet bags

jm

How she loves me, I dont understand
If time wont change me, perhaps she can
And I feel her trying when were apart
God dont let me break her heart

bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

4 posted 2002-07-19 02:28 PM

thank you all for your kindness

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2002-07-19 03:03 PM

this is very passionate and sensual - evokes images and emotions that would have to expressed elsewhere - very good poetry - Paul

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

6 posted 2002-07-19 03:08 PM

YUMMMMMM!!!!!!!!

this is MEWsic!!

you think i'm kitten???

hehe

loved it!! sensually purrrrfect!!!

bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

7 posted 2002-07-19 03:47 PM

Thanks guys, you're making my head swell.

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