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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-07-17 07:41 PM


Awash in twilight they will dance
in harmony with natures all
a haunting melody they sing
while following the Goddess call.

The fire shimmers round their feet
they glow in an unearthly way
Feel resonations of true love
a lucky charm has come your way.

Be silent, you may hear their sighs
and catch a hint of magic too
as lovers everywhere will tell
the fairies dance is all for you.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (07-19-2002 11:23 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-17 07:45 PM


my heart was skipping to the beat of the Fairies Dance - thanks for sharing a wonderful poem - Paul
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2 posted 2002-07-17 07:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, whenever I think of Joanna I always think of mystical fairytale places and faeries are always in them! (kiss on cheek) I wish for this happiness to come to you, sweet friend, you are one of the most deserving to have a love true as this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-17 07:51 PM



...I BELIEVE!!...

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-07-18 01:15 AM


Oh my this is simply enchanting!
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5 posted 2002-07-18 01:19 AM


Awash in twilight they will dance
in harmony with natures all
a haunting melody they sing
while following the Goddess call

A delightful poem, Sandra...
~ moonlit hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-07-18 01:30 AM


Oh Sandra, so very sweet.  I now have some new hopes in me

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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7 posted 2002-07-18 03:06 AM


Oh Sandra I just loved this happy dance, especially the ending!  

You did really good, but you always do!  

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2002-07-18 04:27 AM


I can close my eyes and picture you dancing in this mystical circle of faeries!
Love this one, lil sis!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2002-07-18 07:24 AM


What a beautifully, whimsical piece Sandra ... I could picture this perfectly ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2002-07-18 04:29 PM


strike up the flutes!!!

love it Sandra. . .

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Toerag
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11 posted 2002-07-18 04:31 PM


I really did enjoy this gal...nicely done, (I thought it may be about Balladeer doing the twist)...I surely wasn't disappointed however...you are a very talented poet...(or is that Poetress?....This politcally correct stuff stifles me sometimes)
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12 posted 2002-07-18 04:59 PM


Sandra, this is a beautiful and delightful poem. Thank you for sharing.
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13 posted 2002-07-18 05:00 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2002-07-19 12:44 PM


brought me a smile while reading, Sandra.

M

Mark Bohannan
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15 posted 2002-07-19 09:52 AM


One could get completely captivated in this piece and never want to come out.  Beautiful is the attraction to of it's words to capture fantasy to create a reality we all search for.  Much enjoyed.
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16 posted 2002-07-19 10:32 AM


enjoy
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17 posted 2002-07-19 12:28 PM


Sandra~

this did indeed leave a magic about it....hugssss  you


Lauren~

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I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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18 posted 2002-07-19 02:15 PM


Sandra

I knew they were there, in the bushes at the bottom of the garden.  Loved this!

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19 posted 2002-07-19 03:47 PM


ah how sweet is this one....just love it!!

Charisma

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