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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-18 11:54 AM

Wasted Lips

I once thought I knew what a kiss could do
But I never imagined this.
With his lips very near, it became very clear
his kiss was not just any kiss.

I've not had many of, nor of much been in love
but my lips know when kissing is fine.
My heart tripled beat, as the warm became heat
and his lips became one with mine.

Now you'd think he'd enjoy, every touch I'd deploy,
but these lips may have been not his taste.
So today all alone, I sit by the phone,
an existence in time, such a waste.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-18-2002 12:14 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-07-18 12:09 PM

Maureen darling heart ahhhhh how positively wonderful this is, the depth of feelings that you’ve wrapped and delivered in this are outstandingly good.

Far too often what we give willingly is ignored, but if you’re lucky and blessed you find the one and then the wonder is felt inside forever.

Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

[This message has been edited by Marsha (07-18-2002 12:10 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-07-18 12:17 PM

I think the heat was getting to me this morning...felt like writing something a bit "light".
thank you Marsha
hugss
M

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

3 posted 2002-07-18 01:30 PM

I think this is an excellent, albeit sad piece. At least you had that heat for a moment. Impressive writing.

Life-- "Although most elements are taken from reality, some have been exagerated for dramatic clarity."

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-07-18 05:28 PM

thank you SW..I had that heat for several different moments..if I can recall

M

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2002-07-18 08:42 PM

Maureen - more powerful poetry from your "pen" this made me smile and then deeper thoughts of the feeling od sitting by the phone...loved your poetry - Paul

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-07-18 08:48 PM

I always enjoy your writing and themes so much. Light is wonderful! I believe you must have 220 to his 110 voltage! Smiles. ThisDiamond

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-07-18 11:54 PM

My Goodknight...I enjoy your responses...I changed my number to an unlisted one, so I hardly get any calls except from family...
hey a kiss is just a kiss some say, but not me

M

TD... hey I am sure I have 220 to his 110 until in his presence, then he has 440.
~smiling~
M

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