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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-18 02:47 PM


When he left he said,
"I'll see you later."
Later came and went away
Sad to say
He never came back again

A part of me
Hopes it was just family
Or his friends that kept him away

But I would ask him,
"How would you feel if I did the same to you?"
You would probably think
I was a fool
Or I was cheating on you
Or trying to test your love for me

I would also ask,
"Would you ever trust me again."
You would probably reply,
"Heck no."

Then I hope he would understand
That when he does this
It worries me to no end
And he doesn't get mad at me for worryin'

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-07-18 02:50 PM


I don't get mad because it shows you care. Also, my response wouldn't be "Heck no." I'd probably say "Of course I will." I'm a warrior, and I live for a princess.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-07-18 11:35 PM


I just hate when they do that....

*s
M

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-07-18 11:58 PM


I once went out with a guy when I was a freshman in college and at the end of the date he said "I'll call you".  Well he never did, which didn't upset me terribly because I didn't even like him...
but the funny part is that 4 years later, after I was engaged to be married....
He finally called!!!!!!

Hows that for timing??????
~ hugs of time
(maybe this will become a poem!)

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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